This is my 9-year-old Granddaughters' version:
OnE fine, sunny morning, when The birds were chirping, there was a scene of beautiful flowers all different kinds such as buttercups, daisies, dandelions, roses, tulips and many more that I can’t name. In the middle of this display of sweet smelling flowers, was a house. The house had red bricks and a straw roof with smoke coming out of a chimney.
This is my version:
ThE audience was seated in the theatre. As the screen rose and the lights went up, the audience saw a scene all ready for the whodunnit they'd come to see, which was set in a grand house. At that point the fire alarm sounded and everyone had to evacuate the theatre, so no one saw the play.
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