This is my 9-year-old Granddaughters' version:
Domino wAs a mousE that lived at the bottom of Mr Dill’s gaRden. Mr Dill was forty-six and had a dog called Angus. He’s a Border collie and hears and smells everything. He once smelled the wreak of the rotten onions Mr Dill had thrown away! Domino’s Grandad used to go in the house a lot but Angus always heard him whether he was trying to reach for a cookie or trying to fish out a sugar cube. Once Domino’s Grandad took a dog biscuit! Angus had to spare him for that.
This is my version:
"Here is some rAndom wisdom for thE cuRious. If you have no spare tyre in your car and you have a puncture but try to carry on driving you will probably wreak havoc with the wheel at least. You may also damage other parts of the car. And you are most unlikely to reach your destination. So don't do it." Let's hope that someone hears this and acts on it. I also heard some other excellent wisdom which I will pass on another day.
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