This is my 9-year-old Granddaughters' version:
One cold, crispy morning, Donner was wandering across to the stables when he saw the most shocking thing. All the other apartments in which all his brothers belonged - Dasher, Dancer, Prancer, Comet, Cupid, Blitzen, Vixen - let alone Rudolf - had been horribly wrecked! Donner dashed out and wandered around to find his brothers or even Santa! Then he went to look in the Coal Elves Café, which was of course very noisy, but only found lots of dirty elves clunking and clinking glasses in their dusty clothes.
This is my version:
Lavinia's parents were having an extravagant party for their darling daughter. They'd hired a couple of limousines to pick up her friends and hired a set of professionally made costumes for them to wear. Amongst the costumes were a lion, a witch, a wardrobe, a fawn, a beaver, a wolf and so on. The party was naturally noisy as the children played various games and ate scrumptious (unhealthy) food! When the children's parents came to pick them up, several of them had difficulty recognising which was their child.
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