999 - SINCE

This is my 9-year-old Granddaughter's version:

Everybody had bEgun to get really picky since they had been stuck on the island. The pen of geese had been dismantled due to the pecking on the wood so it was about to fall apart. The last time the sun had shone was about 4 days ago and now it was pouring with drizzly rain. Yesterday, there was thunder and lightening and it sent a shiver down my spine.

The geese in the pen with the rain pouring down

This is my version:

Doctor Johann is an unusual chiropractor. UnlikE most in his profession, he specialises in poultry - chickens, ducks, geese and so on. All his patients are show birds, most of them chickens. The owners would pamper their birds so much so that the feathers shone under the glare of the show lights. The keenest owners would take their prize birds to Doctor Johann so that he could manipulate each bird's spine to release any trapped nerves and improve the health of the bird. Just about all his clients' owners were delighted with their birds' health since taking them to Doctor Johann.

One of Doctor Johann's patients with their owner