This is my 9-year-old Granddaughter's version:
Garfield was having a very good Time watching TV. He was flicking thRough the channels, skipping every intro and living the life. That is until John decided to get out his violin. After about ten minutes, Garfield felt very grateful when John had stopped to rosin his bow.
This is my version:
"That was a gReat start, apart from forgetting to rosin your bow", commented the violin teacher to the young pupil. "Can you now play the new intro I taught you last week and we'll see how that goes". The pupil gave it their best, but it was rather hesitant and unpolished. "That was reasonable", said the teacher - let's go over it now, bit by bit, and we'll see if we can polish it up a bit".
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