Wednesday 13 December 2023

906 - THESE

This is my 9-year-old Granddaughters' version:

One day, when iT was snowing in snowballs, a family of cats livEd in a poor alley full of dustbins which had lots of leftovers and rubbish which helped them to survive. Among these cats were 3 adults, 2 teenagers ( in cat terms ), 4 kittens and an old granny cat. Their leader was a wise grownup called Jack. A few days after that, the rubbish bins started to disappear which was bad news for the cats because they needed the bins to survive. Jack was full of spite. One afternoon, he spotted a man taking away their last trashbin. Jack got mad and charged! That man was never seen again.

Jack and his family
Jack and his family

This is my version:

THe latest rocket launch had failed again and the remnants were now deep in the sea. But, in spite of this, the information gathered during the brief flight was very useful. "Let's not be disheartened by these failures", said the leader to the team, "we are almost there. Let's press on towards the next launch."

Rocket launch failure
Rocket launch failure

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