This is my 9-year-old Granddaughters' version:
Hello! My name is Snowy. I'm a white cat and I live with my owneRs, Ruth, Peter and their daughters, Gwen, Quin and Queenie. Today, the girls (just Quin and Queenie) were playing with their toy cars while Gwen went with Mother to a party at the park on her micro scooter. When Quin and Queenie went to eat their lunch, they left their toy cars all over the floor, likely for someone to slip.... - and someone did very well slip. Dad was walking all around the house looking for his book and he was too busy grumbling that he took no notice of all the toy cars and slipped! "Ow ow ow!" he cried. "This feels like at a chiro-practor!" The next moment the 2 girls were rushing over and helped him sit on the sofa. "This must be yours" said Dad pulling a pink car out of his hood and gave it to Queenie. By the time Gwen came back, to her surprise, Dad was lying on the sofa snoring loudly.
This is my version:
MRs Carter left her handbag on the seat when she left the clinic. But straight away one of the staff popped out after her holding the bag. "Is this yours?", she asked. Mrs Carter was so grateful. "I do appreciate the kindness and attentiveness you staff at the chiro clinic give to us patients - bless you", Mrs Carter replied. After lunch, she went out to see what wild creatures she could spot that day. She finished up in a marshy area where she spotted a strange creature popping out into the open. She gasped at the ugly looking animal. She managed to get a photo. From the photo she was able to identify it as a star-nosed mole. Reading all she could find about it, she discovered that, whilst at the macro level it was rather ugly, at the micro level the structure of its quirky nose was quite beautiful.
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