This is my 9-year-old Granddaughter's version:
Phoebe the owl hAd just Typed heR new story and sent it to Pops the deer. He had been out with Nana the doe so he didn't have time to read the new story so he decided to read it later that night. Apparently, the story was really funny. So funny that Pops laughed so loudly, it woke Nana. Unfortunately Pops had disturbed her from a very nice dream so he ended up getting a scolding in the middle of the night. When he awoke the next morning, Pops thought that he had a very humorous night, thinking back about the story, apart from the fact he had a scolding in the middle of the night. Inspired by Phoebe's stories, Pops decided to watch more children's films so, after breakfast, he started to watch Lady and the Tramp. This annoyed Nana greatly as they were half way through another film already. Nana told Pops to put his phone away and Pops replied “yes deer!” 🦌 😂
This is my version:
Since it wAs a rainy SaTuRday morning, Lucas and Phoebe were discussing what to play next. Lucas eagerly suggested playing soldiers. As usual, Phoebe went along with Lucas' idea even though it wasn't her thing to play soldiers. They grabbed some toy weapons and marched around the living room; tramp, tramp, tramp they marched. Daddy was trying to sleep upstairs because of his tiring week, but had to give up because of the deep thudding sound. Mummy was trying to learn more about what spreadsheets can be made to do and the marching was very distracting for her. "Can you stop the marching game and let Phoebe choose now", she exclaimed. So Phoebe suggested using all the cuddly toys to enact a play she was writing. After a while that turned to arguing so their mum had to intervene again. "Right, that's enough. Can you please play apart from each other now - daddy and I need some peace!"
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