This is my 9-year-old Granddaughter's version:
"Why do humans put food on high places to cooL? Why couldn't they put it somewhere lower?!", sighed Garfield who was staring at a plump, juicy chicken that John had placed on top of the refrigerator to cool off. After his 36th attempt to climb the refrigerator, Garfield finally decided to wait till dinner. Lizz was coming for dinner so John was cooking an especially tasty meal which was lasagne, chicken and lemon cheesecake for dessert. While he was waiting for dinner, Garfield wandered over to where the plumber was trying to plumb the upper bathroom sink (since Garfield had got his tail stuck in the drain while trying to have a drink yesterday). DING! Lizz had arrived. Lizz sat on the sofa applying lip gloss until supper. When tea was ready, John called, "Food time! Come on Lizz, Garfield hurry up, it's lasagne your fave!" At the thought of lasagne Garfield licked his lips and about 5 seconds later, Odie was watching Garfield slink to the table wondering what on earth had happened.
This is my version:
Len arrived at the house to progress the bathroom installation. The house cat was raised from its cosy place by the hot water tank in the bathroom at the sound of the door opening. On seeing Len the cat decided to slink away to somewhere quieter to doze. Len put down the tin of gloss paint that he'd need later and set to to plumb in the bath. This was not easy for Len as he was rather plump. Once he'd finished the plumbing, he had to climb the loft ladder to turn the hot water supply back on. He barely fitted through the access door!
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