This is my 9-year-old Granddaughter's version:
"Oh! Timmy, do you mind awfully by buying some cumin from the shops for me while your out!", called Tommy suddenly. "Sure Tom, what are you cooking for lunch by the way?", Timmy answered back. "Oh!, actually it's for dinner because the weather forecast said it was going to rain this afternoon so I thought it would be best to go and buy our ingredients this morning instead", Timmy replied logically. "Good point", said his brother nodding his head. So Timmy watched Tommy slip into his coat and put on his hat and scarf. Then Tommy pulled on his mittens, tied his boots on and opened the door which let in a cold breeze of air. Timmy shivered as Tommy shut the door and went off on his way to the shops. It was a blustery day that day and the leaves were flying all over the place like paper. It was Autumn and the crisp golden leaves blew carelessly in Timmy's face. He fought the noisy wind while Tommy was in the cute kitchen of their warm, cosy cottage that the two brothers shared, sizzling an egg. Timmy felt a pinch of relief when he made it to Palm camp's local food store. He bought milk, cumin, eggs, lentils and kidney beans. Then he went to Palm camp's supplies store where he bought a new screwdriver.
This is my version:
You would have thought that a chef was used to noise. But Lucian was furious: "This kitchen is too noisy this evening. It made me forget the recipe. I was meant to put in a pinch of cumin but I lost count and put in 10 pinches instead 😬."
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