This is my 9-year-old Granddaughter's version:
"TOMMY, MAKE YOUR WAY TO TOM NOOK'S OFFICE PLEASE!", The loud speakeR bellowed. Tommy stopped his knitting and looked alarmed. Then he looked at his brother who looked up from his book he was reading. He made his way to Tom Nook's office and knocked on the door. "Come in!" came Tom Nook's deep voice. "Ah, Tommy. Now you might be wondering why I sent for you. A new tutor is coming to the island to teach the little Nook children. His name is Jake Sonic McCandron. I'd like you to teach him how to do the knitting classes, cooking classes, PE classes and the art classes since Mr McCandron doesn't know how to do them. Thanks!" Tom Nook said. Tommy nodded then left.
This is my version:
Hugo (who is 9 years old) was poorly and had To stay home foR a few months whilst he healed. He had to keep up with his schooling by learning at home. He was reading a book about birds and was astonished to read about the North American bird called the ruffed grouse which has the ability to make a sonic boom with its wings, particularly during the mating season. Later in the afternoon, his tutor arrived to check on his progress. Hugo couldn't wait to tell him about the bird that makes a sonic boom!
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