This is my 9-year-old Granddaughters' version:
Badger was going to Blue bird’s house for lunch. Mole was also heading to blue bird's house. Everybody loved going to Blue bird’s house because she was so good at cooking. Mole got there first but was dazed cause he had bashed his head on flat-mound-rock. Badger came 5 mins later and climbed up Blue bird’s tree. When he opened the door, Mole was sitting at the table with an ice cube on his head. Badger sat down too and asked, “what ya doing today?” “Well,” answered back blue bird while turning up the heat on the cooker, “Steak and cabbage for the main course and dandelion and buttercup cupcakes for dessert “. “Yum”, grinned Mole. The steak sizzled on the pan while Blue bird got 3 plates out. “ What a noisy cooker! “ complemented Badger while Blue bird brang over the plates of food.
This is my version:
Sandra came into the house, grateful to be out of the cold. But once she'd got her coat, gloves, scarf and boots off she became aware of the rumpus in the lounge. She opened the door to find a scene of chaos. "What's the meaning of this noisy going on", she bellowed. "We're just doing our homework", said Ellie hopefully, speaking for herself and Kylie. "I doubt the noise and untidying of the room was part of your homework and I doubt whether you got much done either.", she surmised, "There's no dinner until the homework is complete and in silence and the room is tidied.", Sandra said as she left the room.
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