This is my 9-year-old Granddaughters' version:
In WoodlAnd Forest, Susan was just getting ouT of bed whEn Felicity appeaRed in her bedroom. “Ma, my tummy hurts” mumbled Felicity, rubbing her heavy eyelids. “Oh, alright then, just get dressed and let me have some breakfast first,” replied Susan slipping on her slippers and wrapping on her night gown.
While Felicity got dressed, Susan buttered some warm toast and helped herself to a banana. After her breakfast she went up and got changed herself. When she came back down as she found Felicity lying on the sofa with a checked blanket wrapped around her. “Maybe the fresh air will help…?”, asked Susan since there weren’t many things to do with a poor stomach, but they only got as far as picking one aster because Felicity said she didn’t feel too well, so they went back. “You poor squirrel”, said Susan on their way back when Felicity groaned for the 4th time.
This is my version:
AunTiE Rowenna has a beautiful garden. The climbing rose over the front of the house is magnificent. She has loads of daffodils, tulips, snowdrops and other bulbs taking their turns. Today she is tackling the task of planting out a large collection of aster plants. It takes until the afternoon until all the asters are planted. She is relieved and tired and hungry after all this and is relieved to be able to sit down and have her belated lunch.
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