1291 - LEMUR

This is my 10-year-old Granddaughter's version:

"EndLEss landscape, it's hot today isn't it, no wondeR Lola's panting so much!", Max said turning the pages of his book. "I'll take her down to the steam for a drink. Its shady over there so I can cool off too!", Lucy announced, getting up. "Anyone want to come?" "I'll come! I'm quite hot myself so the shade will do me some good! Maybe I can cup my hands together and join Lola with the drink too!", Mia said also getting up. "Aaaaw! Listen, the Courtridge zoo has taken on a new baby lemur! His name is pepper because of his markings, according to the paper", Tom said suddenly. "Is that Dad's paper?" "Well, Um, I guess so or... OK it's Dad's paper." "Tom!"

Pepper with its Mum

This is my version:

Feathers McGraw was LockEd in the zoo because he was a buRgler. He tried to befriend the lemur, but it kept falling asleep in the middle of a conversation, so Feathers gave up and started plotting how to steal the blue diamond again.

Feathers McGraw safely in the zoo prison